Dakota69" <dakota69.TakeThisOut@gmail.com> wrote in message
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|I just built a new social Networking/ dating site ( I know Like we Need
| another) in .asp I am continuing to add new features daily. I was
| hoping that you guys could check it out and tell me what you think both
| good and bad. The sites name is www.MakeAConnection.com.
|
| I appreciate any tip or suggestions you may have.
|
OK, site's OK, clean, simple and usable.
If I was to criticise - there's a repeating grammar issue:
"its 100% free..." should be it's (as in it is)
"Sign up now its FREE!!" ditto
(this is rare as most people get it round the other way and use it's for
possessive).
There seems to be an issue with the "Brasilian" girl's profile:
What are you looking for?
serching for
truhttp://Video.sympatico.msn.com/v/en-ca/v.htm?g=c8731842-059c-4dc8-a...-8e92d6
You should be concerned if people can put links in text fields, unless it's
a scripting error at your end.
Finally, I think you should really define your USP a bit more; why should I
use your service in comparison to al the others out there.
Just my 1c.
D.
(unless this is all a scam to get us to look at your page

)
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