On Sat, 02 Oct 2004 16:54:36 -0500, puma8100.TakeThisOut@aol.com (Puma) wrote:
>I am just about to lauch my new online perfume & cologne website.
>Please feel free to email me and let me know what needs work, and what
>is working.
>
>email: jessemenard.TakeThisOut@fabfragrances.com
>
<font color=purple> >site: <a style='text-decoration: underline;' href="http://www.fabfragrances.com</font" target="_blank">www.fabfragrances.com</font</a>>
Howdy Jesse,
Sorry to be blunt. But, it reminds me of a dime store or bargain basement
front window. Do people generally buy perfume there?
Your home page immediately starts shouting at people in multiple colors
instead of greeting them with an attractive smile, a warm welcome, and
getting them to relax.
Very old formula from Alice in Wonderland, "How do you do and shake hands.
Then state your name and business."
Your site should set the kind of mood that walking into an expensive
boutique sets. No, you don't want a picture of some person that only a few
people might relate to. Very few sites manage to come up with graphics and
the kind of color and texture that matches what they need. A soft floral
display mixed with some fancy bottles (that stays in the background) might
work well for you across the top and down the left. Get some soft colors in
the background instead of flat white.
Chris<!-- ~MESSAGE_AFTER~ -->
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